The Creation of the Majestic Shield contest!

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The Lost Tale of the Majestic Shield

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"After numerous battles fought on the plains of havoc among the order of the brotherhood of bones and the nightmare knights war seemed near the end."
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"Demons exempt from mercy ruled the so-called nightmare pits and the few riders who were still fighting for the king of Thais were tortured to finally beg for death.."
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"The real cause of the Great War was kept hidden until it was clear the real intent of the brotherhood: take possession of the oldest and best sword existing: the Excalibug; forged with metal out of this world by the ancient kings dwarves and delivered to the first human, Banor . And this sword was locked in the deepest ground of the fortress of the nightmare knight’s."

"If the demons obtain the sword would be the end of the world.. But only the high class riders who had hidden knew a secret weapon able to withstand the overwhelming force of Excalibug, a weapon as lethal as the first sword that had also been forged by the ancient kings dwarves and delivered to Banor in secret."
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"To this day no one knows what the appearance of this weapon nor its powers. All we can say is that it is majestic and only the most skilled of the greatest guild leader can dare to touch her, and it will appear at the right time to anyone in need."
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Please help me with my English :)

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Check your words by http://www.wordcounter.net/
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Re: The Creation of the Majestic Shield contest!

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Sir Dzidek wrote:
Check your words by http://www.wordcounter.net/
Please remember, words in images also count up!
Hello Sir Dzidek,

In my case the words are the title of the story, there is a problem if it goes over 250?

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Messages from the Server, that we can't change also count? for example a raid message?
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Ice Crambler wrote:Messages from the Server, that we can't change also count? for example a raid message?
If you didn't change anything in the server message, we won't count it.

Ice Crambler wrote:In my case the words are the title of the story, there is a problem if it goes over 250?
Title doesn't count. I've checked your story and you have below 250 words :)

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It is said that once, during an expedition in the quaras lair, the famous Captain Max had been wounded by some Quaras.

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The captain, however, managed to escape and take the first boat to ab'dendriel, where the Sweaty Cylop could host he.

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Arriving at ab'dendriel, the captain saw that the city was completely destroyed by a gang of poachers, who were secluded in the city stealing everything that were there.

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Without losing control, he tried to see if the Poachers had taken his friend, and he realized that his friend had been imprisoned and were torturing by they.

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Without wasting time,He ran to the Queen Eloise in Carlin.

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The queen was ill and his soldiers had left for a war to Thais, but the Queen lent him the Magic Sword of her husband. She blessed the young captain and wished him good luck.

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First He stopped at a store of poisons, took a couple and went to ab'dendriel.

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While the poacher was sleep, he added poison in their wine, so when they woke up,they drank the poisoned wine.

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Half asleep,they wouldn't be able to protect themselves against attack, and Captain Max, killed them all without any problems.

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Then he went quickly to save the Sweaty Cyclops.

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His friend was speechless, and forged for him a Majestic Shield.
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This story shows that it is better to stay calm in difficult times. Sooner or later we will be rewarded.
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Re: The Creation of the Majestic Shield contest!

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Just one question ......
Let's say Mr. X win the first price... but he is on vacation....
Mr X will get nothing, something that the team choose for him, or will they wait till he is back?
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Once upon a time an elderly tortoise who was very bright decided to replace its shell that were worn off by time and battles for a brand new shell .
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Altought in time it realized that to replace its shell for another shell wouldnt be a smart move at all !
So it decided to replace its shell for a SHIELD !
But not any shied , the shield would need to be something unique something majestic , so no other tortoise would ever attack the elder again .
So the tortoise went to the depths of the world .
Very close to the core of the planet the tortoise found the rarest materials on the planet for his piece .
After years of hard work , the shield was finally crafted and the tortoise masterpiece finished .
But it still needed a final touch of art .
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So the tortoise went to the king tibianus and asked the king to bless the shield whit good furtune and make it official as the most beautiful and powerfull shield ever made .
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The elder tortoise was never attacked by another tortoise again .
Two days later , the elder was walking around tortoise island when it saw a man .
The elder approached the man in order to show off his brand new "shell" .
The man was a knight level 16 poorly equipped .
When the knight saw the tortoise he tought "Thas a cool looking shield" .
The knight hitted the elder tortoise in the head whit a rock , killing it and taking the majestic shield .
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The end .

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@Ice Crambler
I think we will wait week or two for answer :)

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Nice to know ;)
Caus I guess some countrys got school free etc. so most participians will be on vacation or what ever ;)
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